Monday, 27 March 2017

My mihi

Tena koutou 
Ko Aoraki Te maunga 
Ko Otakaro te awa
Ko Waimairi te kura 
Ko Ngati Aotearoa Te iwi 
Ko Jeremy taku papa
Ko Loren taku mama
No Otautahi ahu
Ko Romae taku ingoa 
Tena koutou,tena koutou,tena koutou katoa 

Orange

I am yolk,juice,flowers,I am an orange, juicy  cold. I am the crunch in the crunchie bar rough and bumpy. I am a monarch butterfly fluttering and soaring in the wind .I am dishwashing liquid happy to clean.I am camu camu scentsy sweet and beautiful.I am a ripe mango that you've tasted for the first time tropical and new. I am orange juice ,refreshing and delicious , I am a citrus scented candle ,relaxing.I am an ape swinging branch to branch climbing hire and hire to the top of the tree yes that's me I'm orange.

Wednesday, 1 March 2017

Acrostic poem

Rad wakeboarder
Onto it worker
Mad skilled drummer and singer
Amazing reader 
Elegant dancer

Party person  
Happy person
Interesting person 
Little person
Like cooking
Interested in DIY’s 
Pastry chef 
Super person

Thursday, 24 November 2016

Belonging writing

Where do you feel you belong? 

I feel I belong in my bedroom with my family because I feel loved,safe and I can be myself. I go there almost all day everyday.when I walk in the room a blast of hot air hits me.When I get home from school I relax on my bed and read on my iPad. 



 

Tree climbing poem

Tall trees are standing frozen 
Dirty bark is getting in my eyes
A hard helmet is protecting my head from any danger.
Harnesses are holding me tight not letting me fall.
The wind blows a gentle breeze.
I have finally reached the top of the tree.

Tree climbing

Have you ever faced a challenge and been courageous ? 

 Well I have.

 When I was doing tree climbing at  the back of camp with my camp group (number 4) I realised that when you have courage you can do anything.

First we put on the helmets we had to try and fit two fingers through clip strap to make sure it was the right size.

Second we put on the harnesses luckily they stopped us from falling,honestly I didn't need it. 

Then we had a safety talk it's important to know what the rules were so you didn't die.

Then The man told us about the jobs we had to do like the beekeeper and the climber.

Then we finally got the fun part actually climbing the tree.I  was like a monkey  swinging from branch to branch and got to the top of both climbs on the highest tree we climbed!

Having courage help me climbing the tree because secretly I'm afraid very tall heights. 


In my writing I have 

Metaphors when I wrote “I was like a monkey swinging from branch to branch.”

In my writing I need to improve by understanding what language feature I am using in my writing. 

Wednesday, 23 November 2016

Elephant toothpastes

Today Isabella and I made elephant toothpaste and no not real toothpaste think of it as a foam explosion.

What I learnt about myself is that even if the team splits I will keep on trying.

A strategy that I used was listening to what Yann said and improve.

A struggle for me was when Bella and I had to keep popping out to things because we had music extravaganza practice.

A change from the last time was that it was that it worked.




1# Medal: explained what elephant toothpaste was

2# Medal: and liked that I said “ Even when the group splits I will keep on trying”